Pretty Crazy

Looks like the review parts are pretty much covered. Just thought I'd comment and say that I liked this. The ironic ending was kind of funny. And I mean that ...

Insparation comes from odd places, doesn't it? I thought this was really clever and creative. And we can all agree on this, I'm sure. Long live summer! ~Crazy

Okay, that's a short story. Wow, I'm amazed at how much you could squeeze in there! The emotion, the setting, and then the tragedy. Seriously, good job. Is there going ...

Lol I loved it! I usually don't review poetry, but you got my attention. I had to say something. :3 Awesome work! ~Crazy

Cool. I want to read more. This is short and sweet, but I don't think it would hurt to post longer segments. ;) Keep it up!

Just thought I'd let you know I've been following this story. Keep going with it, okay? :P

I rarely read poetry but this is good! It's amazing how you took the same theme for each section and made it progress on like a story. Keep doing poetry. ...

Wow, why didn't anyone else think of writing a story about this site? I enjoyed it very much. *stars* :smt003

Ooh this is much better! Before I thought it was you average family- father, mother, child. Now I understand it's two teenage girls and a little boy? I point at ...

Hey guys, thanks for the comments. And no,empressoftheuniverse, I don't mind if you reviewed late. I was just surprised when I saw someone was reviewing this again! :P I know ...

Star for you! :lol:

Um, try: idiot Oh I know! Add a few more words! That might work! Like this: I was a stupid, selfish, idiot. Or something like that. :D

Whatever your plot is. It's incredible. I. Must. Read. More. :D

Ha ha! :smt005 That's funny! Not the best peice ever written but hey, who cares?

Ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! :smt005 Well that makes sense! Thanks!